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I was able to retrieve it! I had problems uploading the document so the format changed a little. For example, some things that I wanted in bold are not and I am not too thrilled about it. This is the battle between Gin Ichimaru from Bleach and Galen Marek from Star Wars: The Force Unleashed. Please remember that this is my first time writing a fight like this, so constructive criticism is always welcome. I hope you all enjoy it!
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Overall I very much enjoyed the fight, even if we had already determined it would be a bit one-sided! And you made it so Galan did manage to get some wounds on Gin, adding suspense. My only criticism would be Perhaps Galen's emotions were a bit too volatile even for him, but from what little I know of Gin I imagine it would be easy for Galen to get pissed at him. The end-result total doesn't surprise me either, though it does make me curious to what you would say on Palpatine vs. Gin (the former being technically the second-best force user in EU) or if that's one-sided, Palpatine vs. Aien. Heh better yet Luke vs. Aizen the best of their brands I believe. 


I lol'd at the end regarding their blackmail. 

Its unfortunate that this story doesn't have more comments, as I did like it. Sorry about my delay in commenting midterms temporarily drove it out of my mind, plus I usually post more on the FB group. 

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